Chapter 4 pgs. 220-236: A Little Goes a Long Way

After reading the second half of chapter 4, I found that the section about grammar very interesting. By just changing a few verbs and using key nouns from observing, I could change the tone of my paper. It made me start to think that changing little things could go a long way in the end. When I revise my paper, I will now look through my observation notes for the key nouns and make sure to use verbs that stand out.