language in text

dialogue and showing language and conversation can be kinda tricky in writing, "here are two stories from two different waitressing situation that both show how waitresses, when stiffed or stressed, retaliate." each one of these situations will have my similarities or differences but its also the way in which the writer portrays each situation... even in a incident that is the exact same, if you have two different people the views and writing and dialogue chose will be completetly different. even lore, jargon, and the verbal art can be told in multiple views and really add character to the stories, showing what that person is feeling and thinking. i think the reading is telling us students that it is our job as writers to change the information we recieves variants... we need to add our own creativity to make the story pull together to form an interesting story that someone will want to read.